| Prologue to a story I'm working on. Comments and suggestions please. I'm having the biggest writer's block ever.... |
| Prologue to a story I'm working on. Comments and suggestions please. I'm having the biggest writer's block ever.... |
Rough Draft of StoryThe storm was great that night. The wind had hurricane force, clawing and snapping at the nearby trees. The rain pelted down as if the droplets were arrows, drenching anything below the mass of dark clouds. The villagers huddled in their homes. They knew Transylvanian storms, they had many each year. Yet this torrent of water and wind was something they had never seen. Lightning lit up the sky, leaving its imprint on the eyes of any who dared look out the window. Claps of thunder rattled the earth, seconds after the blinding light. The street lamps lit up some sections of the dirt road, but none dared venture outside. Judgment day had come, oRough Draft of Story
TwilightTwilightTwilight
The Sun begins to set as i stand in the street The whispers of night are already on the wind Mothers hush their infants, Doors close against the cold The once aqua sky becomes opaque, almost milky without colour Shadows lengthen, demons beginning to stir in them Stars begin to twinkle mischievously as the moon yawns and rises higher into the sky I watch as the dark shapes of bats fly through the crips air, circling in a mass of writhing bodies My breath creates small clouds, puffing as much as a cigarette Twilight is my time of the day, The part I lo
Human NatureHuman Nature Wind at my back, I walk alone on the dark and dreary street Fallen leaves rustle under my heavy, cold feet Confusion eats at my stone heart, But it doesn’t kill the pain. Every step I take away from you tears another hole in my soul But I can never find you, have you I bare no mark, no blessing from you I can’t take the pain, the loneliness I feel No medicine, no drug, no drink, no meal Nothing can save me but your kiss, your soft breath in my mind Take me, eat me up, and leave me changed I need you more than ever Take over my soul, Love, diviHuman Nature
FreedomFreedomFreedom
The valley below was no match for the fearsome creature His wingspan 14 meters at the very least An ear-splitting roar erupted from between his maw While red flames licked the tongue He was dragon, scales glistening in the early morning sun The sky the limit, powered by muscle He glided the hot air currents Red and gold scales shone like an abstract rainbow But no match for the 10cm pure white glistening teeth As Zetes pushed at the dragon’s back, he flew, until, high in the sky, he was a mere speck of jaw, fire and muscle Mountains west, ocean’s east &
| I'm Lifeless Muse, who's music has become silent. |
The Fork in the Road of Life
Frustrated
HOW MANY TIMES HAVE I TRIED TO GET YOU ON HERE, BUT YOU RESISTED?
I see how it is. you love Jess more.
I'm crushed. >:
how was watching tv the other day? i know for me there isn't much to watch since all my fav shows are done for the season...
besides, jobs are overrated: they take up too much time, and u have no free time....
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